Cats Vs Dogs- Persuasive Writing

W.A.L.T- We are learning to write our own persuasive text choosing our own topic.

I found this fun, but I found it hard to choose a topic. I hope you like it, plus feel free to comment on my blog!

I think dogs are better than cats because, dogs are more playful, they can be interacted with more and they’re loyal. 

Firstly, dogs are more playful. With cats if you want to play with them they either run away or end up scratching you. But when you play with dogs, they never want to stop and they don’t scratch you or they at least be happy when your with them.

Secondly, you can interact with them more by taking for walks and throw the ball for them and teach them cool trick. When with cats they are either too scared for you to take them for a walk or scratch you when you try to put a lead on them.

Lastly, dogs are loyal. Dogs will always be man's best friend. They always know when your sad or angry and they will always be there for you. (Well depends how you treat them.)

In conclusion I strongly believe that dogs are better than cats because, they are more playful, more interactive and are loyal. 

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Trying Sumo Paint

W.A.L.T- Learning to use Sumo Paint.

I really enjoyed using this program to do this masterpiece, it was a bit challenging at first having to use the mouse pad, but I got through in the end. Feel free to comment on my blog!

My Persuasive Advertisement

W.A.L.T- Use persuasive writing to advertise a product or service.

This is my advertisement on a smoothie. I found this activity was really fun to make/do. I hope you like it. Plus feel free to comment on my blog!

My Wonderful 100 Word Challenge

My 100 Word Challenge.

Feel free to comment on my blog! I had a lot of fun making this story!

While riding through the deep underbrush with my sister riding on her rusty old bike beside me. Suddenly startled by a sound in the distance I turned to my sister, that was not there. I rode around calling for her, my voice getting drowned in the harsh wind. I heard a scream that sounded like my sister, I rode towards it. In the distance I saw what looked like a bike in a tree, it looked like my sisters. I ride to the tree and in the tree was a bike and a mysterious lump that looked like a human.

My Persuasive Writing

The Beach Is Better Than The Pool.

W.A.L.T-  recognize the key features of persuasive texts so that we can use them in our own writing.
I hope this persuaded you :) Feel free to comment on my blog!

Time connectives- yellow

Logical connectives- green

Strong emotive words- blue

Reasons- Pink

I think that the beach is better than the pool because it is natural, bigger and free, You can do more than just swim, and it is open any time.

Firstly, the beach is natural and doesn't have any chlorine or any chemicals which can sometimes be bad for your skin. And it also has more life.

Secondly, it is free and you can go anytime you want, whether it’s for a swim, walk, or sandcastle building. And you don’t have to waste your money on extremely expensive waterslides.

Thirdly, it has far more space to play and you can also do more activities such as playing tag, volleyball, surfing, boogie boarding, walking your dog and sun bathe in the warm sun.

Lastly, it is open to anyone of different ages and sizes. In pools there are some pools that some ages can’t play in. Also when there is code browns in the pool everyone has to get out and some of the other pool options might not be suitable for younger kids, or if there isn’t any other pools and there’s only one, everyone will have to go and wait for the pool to be cleaned. 

In conclusion I strongly believe that the beach is better than the pool because its natural, bigger, free, you can do more things and its open any time. 

My 100 Word Challenge Story

I Wondered What Was Behind The Door?

This is my 100 word story, I found it fun and challenging to do, especially trying to end it on a cliff hanger. Anyway I hope you like it! Feel free to comment on my blog posts!

The house had a scary feeling to it, it seemed like it had been there for 100yrs and had held many victims to the murderer that lived in there. I wondered what was behind the door, bones? Fresh blood? Cobwebs? Maybe valuable treasure? My friends dared me to go inside, an icy shiver ran down my spine, it felt like I was taking a gamble on my life. I stepped up onto the porch avoiding broken cavities in the decking. I reached for the doorknob and slowly turned it, the door creaked open and I couldn’t believe what I saw.

My Poetry Book

This is my poetry book from 2017 that I did. It was really fun to try come up with these poems. I hope you enjoy it! Plus feel free to comment on my posts!