My Persuasive Advertisement

W.A.L.T- Use persuasive writing to advertise a product or service.

This is my advertisement on a smoothie. I found this activity was really fun to make/do. I hope you like it. Plus feel free to comment on my blog!

My Wonderful 100 Word Challenge

My 100 Word Challenge.

Feel free to comment on my blog! I had a lot of fun making this story!

While riding through the deep underbrush with my sister riding on her rusty old bike beside me. Suddenly startled by a sound in the distance I turned to my sister, that was not there. I rode around calling for her, my voice getting drowned in the harsh wind. I heard a scream that sounded like my sister, I rode towards it. In the distance I saw what looked like a bike in a tree, it looked like my sisters. I ride to the tree and in the tree was a bike and a mysterious lump that looked like a human.

My Persuasive Writing

The Beach Is Better Than The Pool.

W.A.L.T-  recognize the key features of persuasive texts so that we can use them in our own writing.
I hope this persuaded you :) Feel free to comment on my blog!

Time connectives- yellow

Logical connectives- green

Strong emotive words- blue

Reasons- Pink

I think that the beach is better than the pool because it is natural, bigger and free, You can do more than just swim, and it is open any time.

Firstly, the beach is natural and doesn't have any chlorine or any chemicals which can sometimes be bad for your skin. And it also has more life.

Secondly, it is free and you can go anytime you want, whether it’s for a swim, walk, or sandcastle building. And you don’t have to waste your money on extremely expensive waterslides.

Thirdly, it has far more space to play and you can also do more activities such as playing tag, volleyball, surfing, boogie boarding, walking your dog and sun bathe in the warm sun.

Lastly, it is open to anyone of different ages and sizes. In pools there are some pools that some ages can’t play in. Also when there is code browns in the pool everyone has to get out and some of the other pool options might not be suitable for younger kids, or if there isn’t any other pools and there’s only one, everyone will have to go and wait for the pool to be cleaned. 

In conclusion I strongly believe that the beach is better than the pool because its natural, bigger, free, you can do more things and its open any time. 

My 100 Word Challenge Story

I Wondered What Was Behind The Door?

This is my 100 word story, I found it fun and challenging to do, especially trying to end it on a cliff hanger. Anyway I hope you like it! Feel free to comment on my blog posts!

The house had a scary feeling to it, it seemed like it had been there for 100yrs and had held many victims to the murderer that lived in there. I wondered what was behind the door, bones? Fresh blood? Cobwebs? Maybe valuable treasure? My friends dared me to go inside, an icy shiver ran down my spine, it felt like I was taking a gamble on my life. I stepped up onto the porch avoiding broken cavities in the decking. I reached for the doorknob and slowly turned it, the door creaked open and I couldn’t believe what I saw.